Bad [WD Assignment] From My Writing Past #11: FRAGRANCE (12/7/1992)
Funny how Adam never noticed her scent; she smelled faintly of roses, the kind that grew along the border of her herbal garden—intoxicating. Really intoxicating. Another moment of her scent whispering beneath his nostrils, and he’d be swooning at her feet like a woman. God, but how could he have mistrusted her and thought her ugly when she was so innocent and beautiful that it made him weak with love and longing?
“Rather cold out, isn’t it?” she asked, her hooked nose wrinkling as her face broke into a knowing, sneering grin.
Adam gaped at her as though she’d just told him the most astonishing, the most wonderfully fascinating thing, and nodded. “Never colder,” he agreed eagerly.
Cackling, she seized his arm with bony fingers and gave him an icy look before pulling him inside. “Everyone that crosses me,” she said before closing the door, “shall get a whiff of my love potion and suffer the consequences—and that, Adam, includes you.”
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7 thoughts on “Bad [WD Assignment] From My Writing Past #11: FRAGRANCE (12/7/1992)”
Fabulous, as always. Reminded me vaguely of a story that I had read a few years back…
Alas, I can’t remember the title anymore.
Gee, I wonder if you could illustrate this?
Rarely do you come across a short story that captivates you this much. Also, each word became a visual in my mind.
Neat work, April!
Coffee hasn’t been consumed by yours truly yet. Ergo, my (lame) attempts at forming a comment that spells out the title with the first letter of the first word of each sentence should be excused.
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sorry minn,but could not help saying this.
that sweet and beautiful lady sounded so much like minns 😀
And April , in case you are making an illustration, please do have Minns toon 😉
Big eyes curved nose lol!
ciao
VJ, first you said April and me went for walks with you. Now you see me with a curved nose.
Are these daydreams or have you been typing in your sleep? 😉
minns, if there were a guy version of the snow white, then i would be playing it, and of course the witch , (just for the story sake 😉 could be played by you. Imagine minn saying , "mirror mirror tell me, who is the most btiful (dj)minn of all". Dont worry minn, an image change would do you good. 😀
Oh oooh,Do I see ladies remove their btiful heels. Hey , I dont wanna walk… 😀
Yup minns, am dreaming, dreaming a lot…
ciao
vj
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Parl, I echo those sentiments.
*shakes head*
lol! ala Obelix!!
Shaking the head the Indian Way!
😀
ciao
vj
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